What do you think of the beginning of my new horse story??? (its not cliche)?

The story is amazing. It's definitely not cliche! Sounds like a horse story with an insane twist. I love it. If you want constructive criticism, I didn't like the reference to the MP3 player. It just made it sound less gripping. But I loved it. If you ever finish it, please post it up here! I would buy this.